tà bem feito
o maximo, mas repete demais os mesmos movimentos
tenta nao fazer isso na proxima.
tà bem feito
o maximo, mas repete demais os mesmos movimentos
tenta nao fazer isso na proxima.
Obrigado! Estou trabalhando nos erros para fazer os acertos. Obrgado
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You can consider yourself very lucky for getting that scholarship. I've seen better flash than that but i've seen worse and I do think you will get much better.
Good luck in your new school
P.S. there is a newgrounds preloader that is easy easy to use. It's in the submit page
thanks, i noticed the preloader thing after i had pressed submit so ill have it for my next attempt...and a little note to everyone, the competition at that contest wasnt that great. second place was someone who designed a playstation game box, 3rd place was a girl who made letterhead....LETTERHEAD! it was silly and i was just lucky. I only submitted to get some constructive critism, maybe that was a mistake.
~Jessie
liked but not submited in the right site
As nice as it was, it wasn't a flash movie but .wav .mov and more imported into flash
hmmm well...your definition of a flash movie is what? Cartoons? Vector only?
Get a grip dude... My final output had a freakin .swf extension. If you think all I did was import things into Flash the ur sadly mistaken ...
try harder
1: you don't need to buy a present to prove you love someone
2:He could of taen her to all that crap he did searching for a present
3: you shouldn't use this sentence as a way of defending your flash:
-VmpiRo-'s Response:
Flash by Osmo777:
- none -
nuff said ;)
4: the sound loop was irritating as hell
and I hope the game wasn't a reflection of your real life because that would be pathetic
anywayz, I hope you put more tought into your next flash.
Greetz
1. That was the point of the movie
2. see number 1
3. if he seen my other flash he wouldn't say this was the worst he'd seen. 4. I agree that the sound loop can be irritating. I didn't have time to make it an option, the card was late already, and let's see... u seem to have an "artistic mind" as far as i can tell from visiting ur web site.... so the whole reflection of my life shit is something I wouldn't expect coming from you. anyways, I put this flash together in under a day because I just don't have free time spilling outta my ass. But thanks for the feedback ;) luego.
V
not bad
yo shouldn't use his back as his front, or at least when he was a silhouette at the end you shouldn't show it's his front. that kinda lowers the quality of the movie
Yeah that scene needed to be fixed but i forgot, and due to lack of time I just used cheap tricks to get the same effects... it works for the most part... but yeah i think that the scene lowers the quality of the movie also... Thanks for the Review!
great
This was your funniest matrix version ever
I laughed my ass of and that happens as much as there is bananabread in my fridge
I never have bananabread
same here..how do i come up with this crap..
for a 13 year old it's very good
Too big... January 29, 2004
Reviewed by: Syphyxn Overall rating: 1
... a file size for a short movie, try compressing the sound file down next time.
If you had done that, then who knows how to compress it futher for you.
Graphics: 4 Sound: 3 Interactivity: 0 Style: 1 Violence: 0 Humor: 0
Tschao's response:
flahes by Syphynx
-none- u say u dont finish em? is it cuz they suk or summin, or r u 2 lazy, how bout respecting first-timers bub
you shouldn't insult people by saying that they never had made any flash, because they can make things and not post it to newgrounds and everybody has an opinion.
the guy is right about the filesize
and i think it's a lame response of you.
Still you are very young and did a very good job.
Remember that even the bad critics are good for the improvment of your skills
Bye
hey! don't look at me, my brother *da_english_weiner* writes those ones when im not lookin, and he says "o by the way, i wrote a reveiw for you" jeez, if he ever gets on on that stay, u chek urself, he'll say da same tihng, HE wrote it
nice
I liked the idea but i think the filesize is a prob
heh yea, when your dealing with a big song like ol' fortana your gona have a sorta big file size. especially when you add a million lightning sounds!! haha, yes your right though. next time i am going to make it shorter to reduce the file size :)
deja vu
this reminds me of a play i saw where the puppet gained control of his own actions. It's too bad you don't know the ending. Good job
Ah, yes I'm sure you've seen it somewhere, it really is a pretty common theme. I just used it to experiment with flash. The ending is there, however. He cuts his bonds, and will therefore never be able to move. This way, however, is the only way he can be truly free. That's why he's smiling in the end.
Thanks for the review!
me likes
I liked the last part you added because the first time you putted this animation on newgrounds it was just too short. Nice work
Heh, thanks a lot!
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