Fierras's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[the last match]

Hi xionic

It was a nice animation with a platform fighting game feeling. I owuld have liked to see different camera angles. Maybe next time? ;)

5/5

Xionico responds:

well i couldnt do that cuz it was supposed to hav arcade feeling, so yah, diff camera angles next time

[Rush 2 ++]

Hi Veritas

I've always appreciated your style but this time you kinda overdid it with the hand-cam movement. I tought you used that technique in places where it wasn't needed and where it should be placed you simply didn't do it.

Your storytelling is also kinda hard to follow.

The motion is fine and I admire you for it. Congratz on this piece ;-)

[Taser Fun]

Hi Commie

That's pretty good improvment comparing to the last animation I saw from you.
I like how you kept tasing everybody (-:

Bye Commie

[Pass the lightsaber]

Things you can improve

In case you guys consider doing a second colab, here are some things that disturbed me on this one:

The song replayed itself twice.
Too many scenes with floating body parts.
The scenes were off sync with the music.
Many parts kinda repeated themselves.
The scenes were almost every time long shots taken from the side perspective of the characters.
And at the end with the names, it looked like it was made in a hurry.
I followed this colab on the BBS from time to time and I was expecting something more.

Galenlome and Conair did a good job on their parts but that only won't save the whole.

And you guys shouldn't look at this as braking you guys down, but pointing the flaws that you can improve. I hope to see more and better in the future from you guys.

Greetz,

Julio

[21 OClockStreetTheMovie 1]

poep in je hoofd :p

Het is altijd wel leuk om ondertiteling te hebben in het nederlands.
En de stemmen waren makkelijk om te begrijpen tov andere robot stemmen

vriendelijke groeten

[Meter Dash]

this diserves a higer rating

pretty good animation but Why did he park his car that far :-)

[Paciência (patience)]

O maximo

so a mensagem no fim é que podia ter ficado um pouco mais tempo.

5/5

lucasgonzaga responds:

Valeu cara, axo que deu tempo de ler sim, talvez você não conseguiu refletir sobre ela... um abraço !

[Team Unique - part 1]

music would have been nice

a bit of sound wouldn't hurt anyone like steps the car passing by bg music. It was a nice animation but don't post unfinished work. It's better to wait till the end and well worth.