Fierras's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rush 2 ++]

Hi Veritas

I've always appreciated your style but this time you kinda overdid it with the hand-cam movement. I tought you used that technique in places where it wasn't needed and where it should be placed you simply didn't do it.

Your storytelling is also kinda hard to follow.

The motion is fine and I admire you for it. Congratz on this piece ;-)

[Taser Fun]

Hi Commie

That's pretty good improvment comparing to the last animation I saw from you.
I like how you kept tasing everybody (-:

Bye Commie

[Pass the lightsaber]

Things you can improve

In case you guys consider doing a second colab, here are some things that disturbed me on this one:

The song replayed itself twice.
Too many scenes with floating body parts.
The scenes were off sync with the music.
Many parts kinda repeated themselves.
The scenes were almost every time long shots taken from the side perspective of the characters.
And at the end with the names, it looked like it was made in a hurry.
I followed this colab on the BBS from time to time and I was expecting something more.

Galenlome and Conair did a good job on their parts but that only won't save the whole.

And you guys shouldn't look at this as braking you guys down, but pointing the flaws that you can improve. I hope to see more and better in the future from you guys.

Greetz,

Julio

[21 OClockStreetTheMovie 1]

poep in je hoofd :p

Het is altijd wel leuk om ondertiteling te hebben in het nederlands.
En de stemmen waren makkelijk om te begrijpen tov andere robot stemmen

vriendelijke groeten

[Meter Dash]

this diserves a higer rating

pretty good animation but Why did he park his car that far :-)

[Stop Cryin Your Heart Out]

my comments on everybody individually

The beginning with the letters was very well done.

Popnfresh: started good with a basic animation that I think had something from Synj but it was a fun little character

Joem: The flashing detail on the character was a nice touch but I really would like to know what that is?

Renaenae: Really liked the old man and how his mouth moved. The lines were also very clean

Eric drobile: His animation reminded me of the ones Art Babbit and Richard williams make wich is a compiment btw. Very smooth

Andrez Ciambotti: Really liked the trippy parts shaking at the beginning and the ending. It's a very interesting approach you did there.

Totty: This was really well animated. This is for me a very cool looking character and clud be something out of an mtv music clip.

Greedom: Your flash art is funny

Dustball: So is your, and how you putted that easter egg in there like the ones you put on some of the animatics where gel and your girlfriend show up was great. I found that really smart :p

DJamin: The way you coordinated this colab and edited the parts was great but some things could still be improved. Still nothing ever reaches perfection so for me this is as good as it gets and I <3 it.

Alone in the dark: This part had a very well built character and the walking cycle was really well done in my opinion.

Fierras: originally I had made the animation go24 fps but because of the filesize I had to do it in two's and the animation got alot sloppier in my opinion.

Snare: Very childfriendly characters and it was kinda sweet to see the little guy pop up and sing along.

Granfaloon: probably the favorite of most people and for a good reason.

Renaenae: This was funnier than the first part :-) and very well drawn

Astropuff: I don't know why but I really found it wierd how you animated your character. Really a wierd way of movement, like gelatine or something.

Maylee: Your pole and wings got cut but the artwork with the colors were still very impressive if you ask me

Noginmenanimations. Didn't like the gun. But the lip sync turned out ok ;)

Luis+ Tommy: I'm impressed by tommy's age and the animating skill level he has achieved. And Luis well... He just kinda kicks ass

Fierras: I tought the NG tank drawn with pen would be a nice change from the vectors. and originally I wanted a claymation but that was kinda over the top :p

Lelio Rising: loved the style very much (reminds me of Lepixma), and why is the kiss on the cheak leaking down? does that mean anything?

Pako: where you like on acid when you animated this :p hipnotising the one who is watching the animation with both arms and eyes :p

El Cid: All that muscle and couldn't even handle a little bike :-)
This colab wasn't a sad one but a happy one (as i see it), just like your squirel
Dustball: same comment as first one.

Djamin: yeh like there isn't enough numa numa on NG :p

MJ: you got me

Afro Ninja: the going back and forward with the shaking movement was nicely done (or maybe it's not going back and forward and my brain is just telling me that it is).

Xionic Demon: Rocks your socks off

El cid: nice manga style

Alone in the dark: your part was well made but stayed for a bit too long.

I can't iplossibly use words to describe how proud I am at everybody right now but for the things I can say is that this truly done by heart.
And It shore gave me the feeling of beeing less alone in this big NG website.

Great artists that showed a variety of styles that can be achieved with such a simple but efficent prog as Flash.

And some people complain about this not having a plot or a storyline. What the...? this is a tribute to animation and to newgrounds and is intentionally made to bring everybody a little bit closer together.
Not everything has to start with there once was or A long time ago in a distant galaxy, etc etc. Just accept what it says and what it means.

Greetings and very much thank you to NG and the people on it for their contribution to animation.

P.S. English is not my primary language so sorry for the spelling errors. ;-)

[Paciência (patience)]

O maximo

so a mensagem no fim é que podia ter ficado um pouco mais tempo.

5/5

lucasgonzaga responds:

Valeu cara, axo que deu tempo de ler sim, talvez você não conseguiu refletir sobre ela... um abraço !

[FBF Madness SE]

Fijn

Met wat heb je de tekeningen gemaakt? Een tekentablet of gewoon muis?

Leuke animatie maar probeer volgende keer wat meer verhaal in te stoppen. Als oefening voor versnelling vertraging en dergelijke is dit een geschikte oefening.

Keep up the good work

Rubbertje responds:

I made it with my mouse.. :P

Thanks!

[Team Unique - part 1]

music would have been nice

a bit of sound wouldn't hurt anyone like steps the car passing by bg music. It was a nice animation but don't post unfinished work. It's better to wait till the end and well worth.

[the Animator and the Seat]

Looks like the agressive version of

Norman's McLaren 'A Chairy Tale'(1957).

Well animated short.
Where do you study btw?